Monday, 11 January 2016

Pitch evaluation

What we did well:

  • It was well presented
  • We showed good planning, especially with our locations (The backups for the locations especially)
  • Our high level of detail was good
What was not as good:
  • Slightly rushed due to time constricts
  • It wasn't clear if Callum's character was following mine or not
  • There were practical issues with collecting dust
  • Our storyboard was too short
Our targets:
  • To extend the storyboard through more shots
  • Use a sound motif with the cut to convey the relationship between the characters

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