During the editing process we were told a few things that should be changed:
- Bring in the cross cutting of Callum (Bad Guy with Bouncy Hair) in earlier for the purposes of continuity due to the inconsistent lighting of the candle
- Door Slamming shot needs to be shorter and an echo needs to be added for a better fitting reaction from Esther, to help the audience feel as if it is a genuine response
- Distortion towards the end of the sequence; to emphasise the fact that Callum is the bad guy, that he is evil, and Esther is the heroine
- Also, the motif of Callum (the duh-duh beat) needs to be a lot higher than that of Esther to make it clear to the audience that they are polar opposites in terms of character - the low pitched drum to the high pitched singing


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