Pitch feedback - Storyboard final - Esther

The feedback we received said that our storyboard wasn't long enough to give us 2 minutes worth of title sequence.

To fix this we will be adding in some more shots, and integrating them into our old storyboard. The results are below.

Storyboard by Slidely Slideshow


Shot 1 - Wide establishing shot - abandoned room, a layer of dust covering everything
Shot 2 - Close up - candles, one lit and flickering, camera focused on it, others in the background.
Shot 3 - Low close up - girls shoes walking steadily
Shot 4 - Wide shot - Girl walking steadily, candle in one hand and matchbox in the other
Shot 5 -Wide walking shot - Male assassin striding down a nondescript corridor
Shot 6 - Tracking shot - Girl walking over to candles and placing the one in her hand on the floor
Shot 7 - Cut in - male assassin torso, at an angle
Shot 8 - Extreme close up - match being lit, lingering on flame
Shot 9 - Wide shot - Girl bending over the candles, lighting them and blowing the match out
Shot 10 - Low angle shot - Male assassin striding down corridor
Shot 11 - Angled over candle shot - Girl pulls knees to chest and rests her chin on them, candles front of shot. Pull focus from candles to girl
Shot 12 - Worms eye view - Male assassin climbing stairs
Shot 13 - Wide shot - Girl watching candles, loud bang
Shot 14  - Extreme close up on eye, pupils dilating
Shot 15 - Mid close up - Girl rises quickly and begins blowing out the candles. Her bag falls of her shoulders
Shot 16 - Close up tracking shot - Girl rushing, throwing everything clumsily back into the bag
Shot 17 - Suddenly a black screen, no fade in. Silence
Shot 18 - Fade into tracking shot - from bag still on floor to remaining candle. Stay on candle in wide shot - Man's feet walk into shot over to the candle and begins bending down.
Shot 19 - Close up tracking shot - Man brings candle to face and blows the candle out.Smoke lingers on black screen, outline of candle still visible